Despite that, it turned out well. I like the way you have him as victim, observer and collaborator all at once. At the same time, he kind of feels persecuted by Jennifer but he kind of is Jennifer. It's intriguing, the way Jennifer ends up not simply being the ex-wife's punishment tool but an empowerer of the victim.
I should get a literary award for those three slow's in the third paragraph =p
ReplyDeleteDespite that, it turned out well. I like the way you have him as victim, observer and collaborator all at once. At the same time, he kind of feels persecuted by Jennifer but he kind of is Jennifer. It's intriguing, the way Jennifer ends up not simply being the ex-wife's punishment tool but an empowerer of the victim.
DeleteSexy, sexy, sexy, hot, hot, hot!!! ; )